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Michelle Schwegmann's avatar

ah let's get out in the wide spinning world and be in it and so amazed! more awe, always! great poem & i can see each line you wrote in my mind!

Sue Cauhape's avatar

The wide open ignored and the edditites confined. I want to see that rhino running after a catching car, defying the noose, and butting the frame into contortions.

Jodie Meyn's avatar

Nailed it.

Jodie Meyn's avatar

Thanks for reading and for saying that!

Matt Layne's avatar

I love this, Jodie. It's so quiet and beautiful and powerful.

Thanks for writing it.