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Ned Mudd's avatar

Another fine tale! That dude reminds me of the King of Alabama. Except the King was extremely dangerous when he wasn't laughing, and drank muscadine wine.

Tonya Morton's avatar

Oh wow, the King of Alabama sounds like quite a guy. Thanks, Ned.

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Jul 22, 2023
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Tonya Morton's avatar

Always love your reader’s eye, Connie ❤️

Sue Cauhape's avatar

What a great story. I loved the metaphor about his words were slow trains coming into his mouth and "fucking" was the platform. You didn't say anything about him dying, so I imagine you still maybe ... just maybe ... keep in touch this him. Not too many of his kind around these days ... if ever.

Tonya Morton's avatar

Thanks, Sue! I'm glad there is a Frank still in the world, yep. He's irreplaceable.

Kathryn Reiss's avatar

This is beautifully written, sparkling with details and dialogue that paint a vivid portrait of Frank. I feel I'd know him now if I saw him! and I'd count myself lucky to meet him and get a taste of his f-ing blackberry jam.

Tonya Morton's avatar

That is very high praise, Kathryn! I'm so happy you enjoyed the piece.

Tabby Ivy's avatar

everyone needs a Frank in their lives. what a lovely story about a lovely man

Ellen Fagan's avatar

To paraphrase "Smoking Frank" totally out of context...this is SO fuckin' good. What a delight this man is ~ earthy, kind, self-sufficient. Your words shapeshift into a world of gritty beauty that I would love to inhabit for awhile. Bravissima!

Tonya Morton's avatar

Thanks so much, Ellen!

Paul Vlachos's avatar

Amazing piece. I want to see more profiles, including Californians...

Michael Platt's avatar

Thank you!

Cherie Rohn's avatar

Best thing of yours I've read, Tonya.

Tonya Morton's avatar

Thank you so much, Cherie!