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Tabby Ivy's avatar

oh I love this. Just a delightful way to start my morning! reminds me of the short film, Dust, with Alan Rickman.

Matt Layne's avatar

I love the words and musicality of this, Ned.

Dreamlike evocative.

Damon Falke's avatar

Fantastic poem, Ned Mudd.

Tabby Ivy's avatar

sorry, the short film with the wonderful Alan Rickman is Dust, not Rust! your poem speaks to the same fantasy feel. Here is a link to watch - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDop0Je7svk

Sue Cauhape's avatar

Intriguing little scenario. There's a much longer story behind this, isn't there. Hmmmm. Thank you, Ned.