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Tabby Ivy's avatar

oh I love this. Just a delightful way to start my morning! reminds me of the short film, Dust, with Alan Rickman.

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Matt Layne's avatar

I love the words and musicality of this, Ned.

Dreamlike evocative.

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Damon Falke's avatar

Fantastic poem, Ned Mudd.

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Tabby Ivy's avatar

sorry, the short film with the wonderful Alan Rickman is Dust, not Rust! your poem speaks to the same fantasy feel. Here is a link to watch - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDop0Je7svk

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Intriguing little scenario. There's a much longer story behind this, isn't there. Hmmmm. Thank you, Ned.

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