I mean no disrespect to the poet, but the previous version also had lots to say In its own way. The accidental jumble of lines brought about a certain chaos, and one that lives in the same box as the concept “leaving”. That being said, the “corrected” version might hold a bit more concern for the reader. Nature’s intentions hardly ever favor the species that write poetry.
I mean no disrespect to the poet, but the previous version also had lots to say In its own way. The accidental jumble of lines brought about a certain chaos, and one that lives in the same box as the concept “leaving”. That being said, the “corrected” version might hold a bit more concern for the reader. Nature’s intentions hardly ever favor the species that write poetry.
I need to ponder this comment for a while...