the insects are leaving exoskeletons the commandments have failed us — program error.
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Ned Mudd resides in Alabama where he engages in interspecies communication, rock collecting, and frequent cloud watching. He is the author of The Adventures of Dink and DVD (a space age comedy). Some of Ned’s best friends are raccoons.
I mean no disrespect to the poet, but the previous version also had lots to say In its own way. The accidental jumble of lines brought about a certain chaos, and one that lives in the same box as the concept “leaving”. That being said, the “corrected” version might hold a bit more concern for the reader. Nature’s intentions hardly ever favor the species that write poetry.