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Tabby Ivy's avatar

so lovely, and you are right. its a whole different experience when read aloud. maybe something in the vibration speaking brings from the words? thank you, Luciano

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Luciano Conte's avatar

Thank you for your kind words, Tabby. And, I'm so glad that you got to read it out loud. Do it more than once, especially when you find yourself in different moods, and I assure you that you'll notice a change or different layer each time. Fair well and happy painting.

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John Julius Reel's avatar

Beautiful! Juke should be widely praised for the poetry it publishes.

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Luciano Conte's avatar

Thank you for your kind words, John.

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Ellen Fagan's avatar

So many layers & levels to this beautiful poem.

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Luciano Conte's avatar

Thank you, Ellen. And, if you haven't already done so, do read it aloud to discover new layers.

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