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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Excellent prompt, Fran. While I don't live in a big city, there's plenty of small town "decay" among the old, abandoned buildings along main street. Nevada itself is a collection of ghost towns and broken dreams, boom and bust wanderers going from one strike to another. I'll see what I can come up with on this prompt. Thank you.

Meanwhile, I'll leave you with this poem from my book:

Note on a Fencepost

Thank you, Rancher,

for not tearing down your barn

with its shattered roof

and walls leaning

further atilt each spring

taking up far too much space

on your tidy spread

it languishes peacefully

like grandpa on the porch

its stories growing more distorted

with each telling

too tough to collapse

too brittle to serve

yet winking with mischief

as if it's gotten away with something.

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Fran Gardner's avatar

I remember barns like that in Minnesota. I suppose they’ve all been torn down by now. We used to drive past small farms. They are all gone now, too.

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

How sad! I love the old barns around here in Carson Valley. Most of the ranches here go back 150 years and their barns are hanging in there. If they do decay to the point where the wind blows them over, they're replaced with metal structures. Granted, those don't have the romantic appeal of the wooden ones, but the owls will make their homes in them just as in the old barns. AND the barns aren't replace by a housing tract unless the rancher is really struggling and has to sell land.

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M Sebastian Araujo's avatar

Bravo

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Catherine Sanborn's avatar

So much of Emeryville is completely unrecognisable since I left the Bay Area in the early nineties. Some of it shows signs of prosperity (read gentrification) but most is so unsympathetic to the history and lives lived there. I love semi derelict buildings too. So much character.

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Fran Gardner's avatar

Thanks for the update. I haven’t been to Emeryville in maybe 50 years.

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Ellen Fagan's avatar

Relating madly to this fabulous piece & its accompanying photos!

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