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Sue Cauhape's avatar

I'm going to be visualizing this story forever. Also thinking of a boy who was my best friend, Dwayne, the memories of whom have been washing over me lately. The things that children learn about the world without fully understanding because so many critical details are withheld. The way you've written this, bits of memory revealing those bits that only a child sees, makes this story so intriguing. The desire to fill in the adult drama is strong. This story evokes so much from its mysteries.

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Russell Rowland's avatar

god damn, Tonya. This is an incredible piece of writing. I absolutely love it. Life is an act of repair. That line is fucking brilliant.

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