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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Once again, Tonya, you've shown us what an awesome writer you are. I'm there with you all the way, through the sounds and fury, and the tender, awkward silence at the end ... backlit by a thousand burning fires.

Tonya Morton's avatar

I can't thank you enough, Sue, for the kind words. I'm so happy to have you as a reader.

Sue Cauhape's avatar

I've always liked your articles and the insights into human nature you bring forward. This on was especially haunting ... a young girl who's just a tad out of her league touching souls with someone whose experiences are far beyond hers. So glad she was able to find a trustworthy man to open her heart like that.

Russell Rowland's avatar

This is so beautiful, Tonya. How fortunate that guy was to pick just the right waitress that night. And how fortunate for you to have that experience.

Tonya Morton's avatar

Thank you, Russell!

Tabby Ivy's avatar

so so powerful. bravo on this one Tonya. I ache for that pour guy. I hope he found some peace.

Paul Vlachos's avatar

Major league piece. Fantastic!

Erica Phillips Graves 🔮's avatar

I read this because my husband is at sturgis right now, as part of a band playing gigs all week. Probably my staying at that large campground you mentioned. Your piece was beautiful. Thank you.

Tonya Morton's avatar

Thank you, Erica! I hope his shows go well!

Ellen Fagan's avatar

Spectacular glimpse into a world I do not recognize & a truly poignant soul that I do. This will stay with me for a long time. ♥️

Christopher Ryan's avatar

https://youtu.be/DaYEVKBCk1c

Beautiful, brought tears to my eyes. And made me think of that song (link above)

Tonya Morton's avatar

That's such a great song. Thank you so much!

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Tonya Morton's avatar

Thank you, Connie!