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Tabby Ivy's avatar

I have no words for this one, damon. it cuts deeply and beautifully. so so good. I love it.

Tabby Ivy's avatar

It has been three years, to the day, since Juke published this...reading it once again, with knowledge of what came after - it foretold so much. and still so beautiful and true.

Sue Cauhape's avatar

Your mother breaks my heart. She is so lonely. She wants her family about her, but what she has is a husband who pushes her away. And her attempts to engage in a real conversation are an act of despair.

Ellen Fagan's avatar

What a lovely slice of life ~ painful & beautiful, both. So much achingly unsaid, but so shortage of poignant subtext. Well done.