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Tabby Ivy's avatar

what a powerful compact piece of writing! you packed a lot in there, Sue! bravo.

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

Thank you, Tabby. This was actually an experiment where i merged three poems together into a prose piece. Went together surprisingly well. I'm learning that the forms of writing can be quite fluid.

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Tabby Ivy's avatar

that is fascinating! I never appreciated that you could do that kind of experimentation in writing. it certainly was seamlessly executed.

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Ellen Fagan's avatar

What an exquisite & poignant slice of life, captured in a few vibrant words, getting me thinking & wanting more.

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Sue Cauhape's avatar

There's lots more where that came from. Thank you.

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